Coal Town

Birds don’t stop in this town.
I see them fly past, black peppering
blue, going someplace. I’ve given up
dreaming wings. This town
will know my bones. Condoms
sell well in Joe’s corner store – boredom breeds
but breeding’s a trap, a twitch in the smile
of those steel-eyed shrews
who linger late after church.
I walked half a day, out past the salt flats,
after they closed the movie house down. Smoked
the joint she’d brought back from college
when she returned to bury my dad.
I remember how pale her fingers lay
across my father’s hands –
coal miner’s hands, tarred like his lungs;
like this town.

Ryan Stone

First published in Eunoia Review, July 2016.

Winner of the Goodreads Monthly Poetry Contest, August 2016.

First Place in Poetry Nook contest 101, November 2016.

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162 responses to “Coal Town”

  1. Evocative and melancholy, Ryan. Reminded me of the classic film “The Last Picture Show…”

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    1. Hi, Kathy. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. A great film that one and certainly some similarities πŸ™‚

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  2. This was beautiful. Truly visceral.

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    1. Thanks so much! Truly appreciated πŸ™‚

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  3. This is my first time reading your work, and I must say it is beautiful. Looking forward to what you will do in the future!

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    1. Thank you, Julia. Very kind πŸ™‚

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  4. This is so picturesque β™₯️✨

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  5. Great post πŸ‘πŸ‘

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  6. Brilliant for real

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  7. Wow, this was an awesome find! So many of these lines arrested me! Great work you have here and the image is perfect!

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    1. Hey, thanks so much for reading. I really appreciate your kind words πŸ™‚

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  8. ‘black peppering’ perfect imagery

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    1. Thank you, Beth πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you, Harmony πŸ™‚

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    1. Thanks πŸ™‚

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  9. Loved it 😊

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  10. Wow! This is raw and from the gut! Real life. That’s how it comes at you sometimes.
    Pat

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    1. Love it! Thanks so much, Pat πŸ™‚

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  11. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  12. Ryan, your artistry, both in words and painting are compelling and inspiring! You give me hope for some of my own poems and digital art. Congrats!

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    1. Thanks so much, Gary. Really appreciate your kind words πŸ™‚

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  13. Wonderful poem Ryan, I review poetry past and present on my own page. I hope you don’t mind, but I did that for this poem. I’ve shared the link below. If you have any issues, I’ll immediately take it down.
    Congrats on your success to date, and I’m looking forward to seeing more great work from you.

    Coal Town

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    1. Hey, Adam. Thanks so much for the wonderful review – I’m flattered! Really appreciate the time, effort and deep read. I’m off to explore your site. Have a great day!

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      1. Of course, time well spent.

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  14. Coal dust permeates every living thing
    And Black Widow flowers fill the cemetery bin …

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    1. Nice! Happy New Year, mate. I hope you’re well

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  15. No one does imagery like you!

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    1. Hi, Isha. Thank you for your lovely comment – I truly appreciate your kindness.

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    1. Thanks so much, Violet πŸ™‚

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