Choke Town

The butcher’s sign still swings,
though the shop’s been gutted
since Gaz ran a hose from the tailpipe
and left the lights on.

The school gate’s rusted open.
Wind sifts chalk dust
through cracked windows
where names once lined the roll
like prayers in hell.

Down at the silo,
kids mainline in the shadow
of grain that never came.
One girl carved a star
into her thighβ€”
the first scar
she chose.

The creek runs red when it rains.
No fish, no frogs,
no reason left to lie.

Dogs roam in threes.
Cattle follow fence lines
out of habit, not hope.
Even the sky
hangs lower than it used to,
like it’s tired
of watching us fail.

Mothers drink in sheds.
Fathers forget birthdays.
The baker feeds birds
because they still show up.

And under the rot
of pubs, paddocks
and cracked hope,

the town exhales.
Shallow and slow.
Waiting for someone
to mumble last rites.

Ryan Stone


Comments

10 responses to “Choke Town”

  1. A grim portrait, of a no-longer, flourishing, town…

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    1. Thanks for reading πŸ™‚

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  2. Wow! This painted such a dismal picture- yet drew me right in! I was especially drawn to the ‘first scar- she chose’ brilliant- that one line encompasses a lifetime.

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    1. So glad it came across right. Thank you, Violet

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  3. Wow ! This is a powerful read; how did this NOT get more comments ?????

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    1. Haha, thanks John. I guess I’m just an acquired taste πŸ˜‰ Really appreciate the read and comment, mate.

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      1. stay golden, Ryan πŸ™‚

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  4. is that painting yours? it’s so full of grief and despair; not my favourite topic but it’s so well done —

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    1. Thank you. It’s mine, but only on a digital painting program. I’m not much good with a real brush unfortunately. I really admire people who can paint and draw – the skill is completely beyond me!

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      1. same here 😦

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