Shaping a Poem

It’s a quiet thing, a word found
in the stillness of dawn
while dreamers slumber
and the new moon succumbs
to day. A fading thought,
soft intake of breath
in the long pause

between sleep and wake.
Sometimes it’s hope
enduring wildfire, flood,
or the dusts of time.
Maybe dinosaur bones,
a lost tomb, or scarecrows
guarding lavender fields.

Perhaps a dew-drizzled
cobweb, a jonquil, cloud
or song. Most often
it’s your breath,
soft and steady,
promising one more day
in which I will belong.

Ryan Stone


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19 responses to “Shaping a Poem”

  1. Nice. I love the ending.

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    1. Hi, mate! Thank you 🙂

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  2. You’d painted a beautiful picture with your poetry, truly, amazing! The love and connection you described, only a lucky few can, find…

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    1. A beautiful response. Thank you kindly 🙂

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    Really so wonderful, Ryan.

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  4. So beautiful, feels peaceful and safe.

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    1. Thank you 🙂

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  5. Beautiful poem & the photo is brilliant!! Thank you for sharing your love of words!

    BellaSita Mum (Sherri-Ellen) & **purrss** BellaDharma a kitty poe-et

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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  6. Thank you for this serene and heartfelt reflection—it’s a comforting promise that we all belong somewhere, in the quiet pauses and breaths that carry us forward 😊

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    1. Hello, Aadithya. Thank you for reading and leaving such thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate it. Have a lovely weekend 🙂

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  7. Uncertainty and certainty in one. You certainly have a deft touch.

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    1. Very kind! Thank you 🙂

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    1. Thank you, Beth 🙂

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  8. Lovely study. Especially the opening lines, a word found in the stillness. And the long pause between sleep and wake. I’m also loving the images you’ve created. Took me totally by surprise to see your signature on them.

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    1. Thank you. That one is a photo I took in a nearby Redwood Forest. Truly a magical place.

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  9. Dawn maybe a quiet thing
    But I usually sleep in …

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    1. Haha, half your luck mate. Definitely beautiful…but a warm bed and a peaceful sleep is nothing to give up lightly 🙂

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