Do you know how it feels
to stand alone in a forest
in the caesura
of a gathering storm?
With a graceful pirouette
the north wind about-faces
and just as quickly
a sou’ wester replaces
the breathy, dry kisses
of long afternoons in the sun.
Drawing breath from your lungs
and heat from your soles,
lowercase twisters
scatter leaves with abandon.
There’s a pause,
it is electric,
then thunder above.
A first splash, the herald,
caresses your skin
and whispers of days
when you sucked the air in
and laughed until laughter ran dry;
when you danced and you sang
and timeless, you lay
entwined ‘neath an indigo sky.
In that place, alone,
your lenses will fail
and your notebook fall
by the by.
Your shutter can’t capture
the depths of magenta;
your pen,
the dreaming Magpie.
It’s a moment,
just a moment,
before the storm breaks
and the old song
resumes its same rhyme.
Do you feel it?
Can you grab it?
A resolution, of sorts:
to wring from
each minute
a lifetime.
by Ryan Stone

Beautifully written, Ryan. I am in awe, feeling every word. I can grab all the senses, and I just don’t have to try. Everything just comes so easy. Amazing picture.
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Thank you so much, Katherine ๐
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You’re an incredible writer!
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Whoa! What a lovely comment! Thank you, Belinda – you just put a huge smile on my face ๐
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this photo! the writing! woah, you are so talented! keep up the great work!
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Thank you for your visit and for taking the time to leave some kindness – truly appreciated ๐
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“Drawing breath from your lungs
and heat from your soles”
“When you sucked the air in
and laughed until laughter ran dry”
Had heard of tears and blood running dry. You painted magic with this. Drying my mouth to the hilt. I need air, Ryan. ๐
Can it get better than this? No Sir!
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Haha, how much I look forward to hearing your feedback, Manan. Thank you as always for brightening my world ๐
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That is so sweet of you! I love feedback-ing you :):)
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Loved the picture! Did you take it??
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Thank you ๐ Yes-it’s the trail I run with my dog. My slice of paradise and the place 99% of my writing begins.
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Ya can’t blame you for being so creative if you go to a place like that!! ๐
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I feel lucky every time I set foot amongst those trees ๐
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๐ I get this feel of tranquillity just by looking at it! Its indeed a paradise.:) Lucky you! ๐
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Wow! Ryan this is beautiful! And the photo is amazing I love the spot, the fog the colors everything I could use it in one of my digital art. Do you run in this magical spot? ๐
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What a lovely comment, Carolina. Thank you! Yes, i run this trail most days. It’s best in the morning, being a rainforest it takes ages for the fog to lift. Photos never do it justice. You’re most welcome to use the photo however you like ๐
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Thank you! How beautiful truly a magical place to go run no wonder you write beautifully! Places like this give the purest energy! I love the photo! I will use it sometimes and of course you will be credited! ๐
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Thank you, you’re very thoughtful. No need to credit it if it complicates things – yours to use in friendship ๐
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Thank you Ryan you’re awesome!
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As is your friendship ๐
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wow. so many amazing lines. There is a fierceness in this poem–a hunger for all life has to offer. You are back in force after your break!
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Lovely comments, thank you Mel. Fierceness is perfect – life is for living!
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Yes it is! ๐ you’re welcome
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This is beautiful, Ryan, and that photo is absolutely breathtaking. Very well done! This probably has become one of my most favorites of yours!
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Thank you so much, Al. I actually wrote it for M a little while ago. Glad you like it ๐
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M? ;]
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Well, inspired by a comment he made in an email. So, kinda for him!
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Haha! I hope he liked it! If not, I’m gonna have some words for him. ;]
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Reblogged this on Busy Mind Thinking and commented:
This piece embraced a storm. Therefore, I couldn’t resist a re-blog.
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Thank you once again, dear friend. Your kindness is truly appreciated ๐
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I took a chance re-blogging without permission, thanks for reassurance it was okay to do so. Great piece as always, and I cannot resist a storm. You’re welcome, my friend. ๐
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I hereby formally and under no duress assert and affirm that the abovementioned poet, namely Belinda of busymindthinking, may from this day forward reblog from my site, namely daysofstone, at whim with or without seeking prior permission to do so. Signed and dated by my hand this 29th day of March in the year of our Lord 2016.
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AWMP = almost wet my pants! Why thank you Kind Sir. Omgosh I can barely catch my breath! Bahaha!
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Love this. Great rhythm and flow. Wonderful descriptions and the images your words create are beautiful. Like the lines: “to wring from each minute a lifetime” I believe that is always what we crave what we want. I wish we could always do it!
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So true, Mandi! Thank you for being so thoughtful ๐
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WOW WOW WOW! Of course I liked every line, but when I can, I choose a fave bit–“lowercase twisters” is Brilliant!!
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Heya! I love hearing what parts stand out – thank you, Azul ๐
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Most welcome–sometimes it’s impossible to choose a fave, as you have a gift for making every word count–and shine ๐
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Yes!! A magnificent resolution! To take it all in, and Carpe Diem! May both your and her wishes come true everyday Mr. Stone! ๐
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And you as well, my friend. Thank you ๐
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Ryan, wow man, fantastic writing as usual. We should collaborate, if you’d ever want to, I would be honored.
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I’m flattered, mate. That’d be very cool – I’m a big fan of the collaborations I’ve read on your site. I have to warn you, though – I don’t think I’m particularly easy to write with. My writing comes in dribs and drabs between work, raising my boys, inspiration fluxes…could be painful for you!
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you should ask my previous collaborators how tedious it is to work with me ha. Time zone issues, work issues (damn jobs) always get in the way of fantasy life.
I have an idea. I will email you
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Haha-we’ll be a perfect fit. Please do – daysofstone@bigpond.com
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Ryan, โFrom the Sidelinesโ is stunning. Very impressive, the writing is beautiful, not only for beautyโs sake, but also for insightfulness, recognizing the essence that moments are able to capture. Itโs really wonderful as the narrator asks the reader, โDo you know how it feelsโ and then proceeds to take the reader on an amazing visual and emotional journey where each minute holds a lifetime of events. Truly outstanding my friend, you have such a marvelous talent. Please enjoy the rest of the weekend, always wishing you well. ~ Mia
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Dear Mia, your feedback is thoughtful as ever. I can’t tell you how good it makes me feel to know that such a talented writer is willing to invest the time to read and study my writing and offer such considered and insightful responses. Your friendship and support means the world and I thank you kindly.
My weekend was fantastic, thank you. I hope yours was also. Take care and thank you once more ๐
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Ryan, you are so welcome. Itโs a pleasure to read work of this caliber, Iโm thrilled to be able to enjoy your beautiful offerings, thank you. Please have a wonderful week. ~ Mia
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Your writing, like your photography, captures those little moments that are often missed by many of us. In both cases, time stands still and readers can place themselves in your shoes. All the subtle personal movements are perfectly balanced with what’s happening in your environment. As you resolve to capture the essence within the seconds, we are left running into the forest with you, beyond the building mist, and anticipate what is next. Great writing, my friend. It’s truly inspirational.
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Not half as inspirational as receiving feedback like that! Thank you, I’m humbled and incredibly grateful.
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You are kind, my friend, and most welcome.
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Such beautiful imagery with your writing Ryan. The rhythm is so melodic too. ๐
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A lovely response thank you Judy ๐
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Ah, an Australian summer storm, in the ranges, maybe the Dandenong’s or perhaps the Otway’s, but whatever, a beautiful poem, and loved the unusual line, “your pen, the dreaming Magpie”….
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Thank you, Ivor. Yes, you’re spot on – the Dandenong Ranges are my backyard. Very lucky ๐
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Beautiful imagery. Perfection, my friend.
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Truly appreciated, Eugenia. Thank you ๐
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This is beyond words. Beautiful piece Ryan!
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Thank you so much! Such a nice comment to receive ๐
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Wow, this imagery is fantastic!! Incredibly vivid and like being right there. I won’t say more having analyzed a couple of your wonderful poetry pieces I’ll spare you a third. Hope u publish a poetry book someday. Just saying, but I’d buy it in hard/soft cover and I can’t say there’s many books I wouldn’t just buy on line these days. Hope all is well. Fall here nearly hope you’re doing good ๐
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Hi, Amanda! What a lovely thing for you to say. I’ve actually been looking through my poems lately with a view to putting an ebook together. I’d love to have a small book of my own published. Thank you for the encouragement. Enjoy your Fall, I’ve finally swapped winter for spring but, if anything, it seems colder and wetter than it was! I hope that changes soon-I’m in desperate need of some sunshine. I really appreciate your kin comments, thank you ๐
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Sunless weather is no fun! For me I notice the lack of Vitamin D. Enjoy your spring. I hear summers are pretty hot hot there. My brothers visited a couple times. First time he went in Australian summer he said never again lol. It’s a hard change when that time of year in Canada is -30 degrees Celsius.
And yes put together that poetry book!
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Haha, yes they can get very hot – weeks in the high 30’s – 40’s. I love them. I think I’d die in that kind of cold. Nights here have been getting down to 1 or 2 degrees and I struggle!
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Haha that made me laugh. Guys here wear shorts when it gets to that temperature in spring lol. I aren’t the only one the first cold snap pretty much kills us all and we pray for 6 months of winter not 8!
I’m the opposite, I wish O could stand that heat but unless it’s a dry heat like in Arizona I get heat sick. Takes a few days to get used to it! My brother did love it over there though.
Thanks again ๐
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Absolutely beautiful,
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Thank you, Saliha ๐
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…..to wring from each minute a lifetime! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Thank you, Vishakha ๐
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Nice photography and written.
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Thanks so much, Pratik
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ahh this is so wonderful, your words just paint such beautiful pictures. The picture is captivating as well. Amazing!
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Youโre wonderful. Thank you ๐
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Aww thank you for that sweet comment! And, you’re very welcome!
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Love your tag line too … too much coffee, too little sleep, a love of words. Definitely relatable!
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Haha, thanks! ๐
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Wow! The words are so powerful ๐๐๐๐
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Beautiful words and picture
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Thank you ๐
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You’re welcome ๐
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Goodness! The setting, the imagery, the sounds, the intimacy with the reader.. beautiful work!
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Hi, Isha. Thank you so much for your lovely comments ๐
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Wow. Fantastic writing!
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Hi, Nicole. Thank you so much!
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Great
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Thanks ๐
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Yes well said..
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Thank you ๐
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This is so nice
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Thanks so much ๐
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so important to seize each moment
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Truly ๐
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Ah, an Australian summer storm, in your backyard, the Dandenongโs, a beautiful poem, and I loved the unusual line, โyour pen, the dreaming Magpieโโฆ.
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Thanks so much, Ivor
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Your welcome Ryan … let’s hope we get some rain soon
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pictures that make the heart peaceful
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Very beautifully written ๐คฉ
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Thank you so much! Very kind of you ๐
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love all your descriptive and imagery elements!! your flow is smooth and wave like. I’ve always found reading poetry helps me write better and just feel more, especially good poetry and this poem is beautiful.
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Thank you again, Amira. I really appreciate your kindness and thoughtful feedback
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A reminder that nature, amidst all tumults, still has its beauty.
Thanks for reminding me to never loose hope in humanity.
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Thank you for such deep, thoughtful feedback. Truly appreciated ๐
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Wow ๐ฎ this is beautiful, Ryan. Nice to met you and to see your beautiful work. Iโm sold.
Let me subscribe now. Continue โ๏ธ
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Thank you so much for dropping by ๐ And for you lovely comments, too!
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It’s my pleasure. ๐
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This is so beautiful. I can actually feel myself in the middle of the forest and experience every feeling and emotion ๐๐๐๐
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What lovely feedback! Thank you, Anoushka – high praise ๐
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Beautifully written
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Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. Truly appreciate it ๐
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Nice
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Thanks so much
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I love the way you write.
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Very kind. Thank you ๐
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You are welcome
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Beautiful
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Thank you ๐
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Thatโฆ. was simplyโฆ Itโs so beautiful!!
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So very thoughtful of you! Thank you so much-made my day ๐
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Ryan, this is the best poem Iโve read in ages. The writing style lends a Robert Burns credence to it. I absolutely love this. Awesome, awesome word descriptions!
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Hi, Corrie. Thank you for such thoughtful and considerate feedback. Your comments have brightened my day. Lovely! Thank you for reading ๐
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This is simply wonderful! The words match the picture perfectly, I can almost feel myself there.
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Hi, Samantha. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such lovely thoughts. Makes the writing worthwhile. Iโm lucky enough to have a forest at my back doorโฆmakes for some lovely photos ๐
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Love it
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Too kind. Thank you ๐
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great photo and descriptive writing; what made me sit up and respect were two phrases: ‘the caesura of a storm’ and ‘lowercase twisters’ : that is original writing —
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Hey, John. Thanks so much for your feedback-truly appreciated ๐
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Beautiful shot
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Thank you. Itโs a beautiful place ๐
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