Ochre
soaked skies, sunrise
woke her –
blue grass
seas lilt behind
stained glass
at dawn.
On morning’s grace
she’s borne.
Ryan Stone
too much coffee, too little sleep, a love of words…
Ochre
soaked skies, sunrise
woke her –
blue grass
seas lilt behind
stained glass
at dawn.
On morning’s grace
she’s borne.
Ryan Stone
You are something special and unique, Ryan. There is no one who writes like you… Speechless. ππΌ
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You’re so lovely, Em. Thank you for the smile. I really appreciate your kindness. I read your email and will reply soon. Hugs π
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Fabulous, Ryan! ππ»
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Legend! Thank you, Kunal π
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Cheers, buddy!
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Poetry at its flying best!
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I’m flattered! Thank you so much π
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You are most welcome, clever poet π
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This is lovely Ryan. πΊ
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Thank you, Lola. Have a magic weekend:)
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Read it over and again until she came alive in my mind’s eye. Mmm.. loved it. And missed you!!!! lots, and lots!
β€ π
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Thank you! It’s nice to be missed π
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Only you can paint an image so vivid with a handful of words. Beautiful! π
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Once again your lovely words have brightened my day. Thank you for your kindness, Tanya π
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To say that I love your work would be an understatement. Have a great day, Ryan. π
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I agree with Emily, Ryan–“special and unique” are among other words of praise I’d use to describe you and your stellar writings. I’m thinking I need to reblog this one–okay with you??
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You’re very sweet, Stella. Yes, of course – I’m flattered:)
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Thanks, but you only know my good side–haha!
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Reblogged this on LINES of SHADEAU and commented:
I’m totally crazy for anything Ryan writes–it’s difficult to describe his gift, some call him “unique”, which is true, but there’s so much more–I guess he just strikes notes that resonate deep in the marrow of my heart. If you enjoy this piece as much as I did, visit his blog for MORE good stuff–don’t leave this Stone unturned!
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Thank you for your kindness, Stella – you’ve made my day π
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Feels good to make someone’s day π
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:):)
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There’s a lyrical flow to your poem that works very well. Nicely done π
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Hi, Jade! Thank you so much for visiting and taking the time to leave such lovely feedback. It really does mean a lot to me. Have a wonderful day π
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Lovely. Great descriptions of colour π
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Thank you, Mandi. Lovely feedback π
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That’s lovely, Ryan. How are you? We miss you over at the Writers Nest.
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Hi, Patricia! I’m well, thank you. How have you been? So good to hear from you, thanks for stopping by. I miss WN and the wonderful people there very much. I scaled back all my external activities to focus my limited writing time on actual writing…but I miss the interaction very much. I’ll head on over and catch up with the gang π
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Lovely and beautifully descriptive.
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Thank you, Eugenia. I’m glad you liked it π
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You’re welcome.
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This is really lovely, Ryan.
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Thanks, Sarah.
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Another poem that has touched my heart. Love it!
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Hello, Heather. Lovely to see you here again. Thank you for your nice comment. I hope you’re well π
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Very nice ππππ
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Thank you!
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This is mesmeric. π§‘
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Thank you so much, Shreya. Very kind π
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Thanks for reply and read my intersting blogs and follow on wordpress
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Your last line
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Really beautiful β€οΈ
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Thank you, Bridgette. Very kind π
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I enjoyed reading this poem. Very meaningful and deep! Thank you for sharing this great piece!
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Lovely feedback, thank you π
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Youβre welcome. Have a great rest of your day!
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each and every day
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Every single one π
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Wow. This is so beautiful and powerful at the same time. I loved it β€οΈβ¨β€οΈβ¨β€οΈβ¨
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Beautiful poem. I love the simplicity and imagery. π¦©
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Hello, Mary. Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave such thoughtful feedback π
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All my pleasure, Ryan. π¦©π
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Lovely ryanβοΈ
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Very kind. Thank you π
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Beautiful π€©
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Thank you π
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Very cool!
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Thanks so much!
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You’re very welcome my dear friend! #GoodWorks
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Lovely
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Thanks
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The winter seem to be colder
than what I remember
This winter I am slower and older
than what my mind can remember
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I hear you, mate! Hope youβre well π
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Well enough to walk the doggie every day, despite the cold π₯Ά
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much π
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Wow, lovely! Makes me smile.
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Thank you, Amira. A lovely response π
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This poem is one of a kind. I like the succinctness and the sound quality. It speaks volumes.
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Thanks so much π A musette
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Beautifully written π β€
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Thank you for reading, Varnika π
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Absolutely beautiful
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Thatβs lovely of you. Thanks so much π
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Beautiful β€οΈ
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Thank you βοΈ
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How beautiful, the writing is full of light
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Such a lovely comment. Thank you – made my day π
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Always the lines says something special…
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Thank you, Athira π
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Lovely π
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Thank you for reading π
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Beautifully written π
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Thank you π
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I really like this Ryan, thank you for sharing!
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Thank you for your lovely comment π
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materpiece
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Thank you π
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Beautifully written! The imagery of dawn and nature is so serene, it feels like a peaceful pause in time. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece!
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Thank you for such a lovely comment – youβve brightened my day π
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Nice
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Thank you
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nice
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Thanks π
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Simply beautiful πͺΆπ
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Thank you so much, Anita π
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The pleasure is mine,Ryan πΊ
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Beautiful poetry, Ryan! Your writing, as always, possesses the power to reach out of the screen and touch people’s hearts. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate your kind feedback π
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It’s gorgeous actually β€οΈ
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Thank you π
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Your poetry is astounding! It really moves me. There’s no other word I’d use to describe it but beautiful. Thank you! Have a lovely day! BBB
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Thank you for such a lovely comment, BBB. Truly appreciated π
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