You will never fall in love with me.
Don’t try to convince me
That I will always wait for you.
If you really look, you’ll see
I’m not here for the long haul
Don’t imagine
You give me reason to stay.
When things get hard I’ll leave –
Don’t imagine
I’m not like the others,
Goodbye.
I’ll never say
I love you.
(Now read from bottom to top)
Ryan Stone
love the pic and love from the bottom up, i think we fight with ourselves over which way it goes sometimes
Wow again!Would love to try to make one lolz. Thank you for sharing this amazing poem😊
Reading from the bottom made me smile yet when I read from the top I wondered…this is good 💯
Hello Ryan! WOW! What a creative & meaningful poe-em. I read it from top to bottom; then from bottom to top (tears leaking from my eyes) & then listened to your audio. You are so talented& creative! Thank you for sharing your work.
BellaSita Mum (Sherri-Ellen) & BellaDharma (my poetry writing cat) from THE Purrfect Pad
Haaaa… I got stunned reading this and even more amazed when I read from bottom to the top. This is genuis. I love it. I will definitely try it 😊. Thanks so much for sharing this piece
This work is a masterpiece… You opened my eyes to the truth in subtility.
Thanks for sharing.
Wow Ryan, sometimes the truth is harsh but absolutely necessary. I love the flow of the poem
I adore this piece. I can feel vulnerability & pure emotion while reading this. I also love the touch of ‘falling up’ instead of ‘falling down’. It’s extremely creative.
I’m definitely surprised and never expecting the reverse is awesome! Let me try this one🤭🥰🤔 You did your best! Great job!👏👏👏
What a wonderful use of literary device to put forth both views of the two sides that too in such a deep poetic way.
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