Almost Eden

You knew.
She knew.
It was thick in the air โ€”
like rain that never falls.

Her hand on the doorframe.
Yours in your pocket,
clenched around nothing.

The storm had passed.
But the heat hadnโ€™t broken.

She looked at you
like you were the answer
to a question she wasnโ€™t supposed to ask.

And you looked at her
like a man
measuring the cost of heaven.

Her lips partedโ€”
not an invitation,
just a fact.

You couldโ€™ve.
She wouldโ€™ve.

Instead,
you stepped back.
Said something soft.

She nodded.
Closed the door
like it meant nothing.

And Eden
slipped away
behind her.

Ryan Stone

Door to Eden

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10 responses to “Almost Eden”

  1. Incredible, Ryan

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    1. โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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      1. Back at you a hundred times โค๏ธ

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      2. So sweet. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thanks so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Starlight Avatar
    Starlight

    ๐ŸŽผ Last Exit to Eden ๐ŸŽถ

    This has always been my favourite one ๐Ÿ’—

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  3. Starlight Avatar
    Starlight

    ๐ŸŽผ Last Exit to Eden ๐ŸŽถ

    This has always been my favourite one ๐Ÿ’—

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