Drought Town

This is the summer of red dust. Everything
sucked dry—hollow as cicada husks, wedged
under eaves and porch stairs—waiting
for a wind change. On the road out of town,
empty grain silos loom, perched like headstones
over wheat-field graves. Harvesters sag, tyres
cracked like the asphalt. Rotting carcasses
litter riverless beds—tongues swollen,
flyblown, unslaked. First, a wheeze,
then my pickup spews steam. It dies in a ditch
under a burnt-orange sun. Tiger snake chunks
graffiti the hood’s underside, one blind eye bulging
from the torn head. It must have sought shade
or wiper water—sliding up from the parched earth
miles back. Now it’s just one more dead thing
in a land of dead things. This is the summer
of red dust. It swirls and the road ahead blurs.

– Ryan Stone

first published by Eunoia Review


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23 responses to “Drought Town”

  1. This us surreal!

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    1. Thank you 🙂

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  2. Oh that landscape came alive there!!!

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    1. Thanks, Rajani 🙂

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  3. So very sad to see the effects of the drought Ryan. Your words are so alive, the vision all too real.

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    1. Thank you, Miriam. That’s lovely feedback 🙂

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      1. Pleasure. How’s life treating you Ryan?

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      2. All good here, thank you. Dying for summer! And you?

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      3. Same. I’m looking forward to longer days and warmer weather. 😊

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  4. You have a way of making words come alive. Brilliant!

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  5. your words really made me feel I was there, excellent descriptors

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    1. Thanks so much, Beth. Lovely feedback

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    1. Thank you so much 🙂

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  6. Nice post 👍😎

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    1. Thank you 🙂

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  7. Superb word imagery of an ‘Aussie’ red-dust drought Ryan …

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    1. Thanks mate! Always appreciated.

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      1. Always my pleasure 😊

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  8. You just don’t have a way with words. You can paint a scene so vividly that I will be there with you! This is a phenomenal poem!

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    1. Very kind of you! Thank you, Cendrine

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  9. Hi Ryan, new subscriber here. I notice some of your posts have much higher numbers of Likes than others. May I ask if you promoted them using Blaze or some other tool? I ask because my blog traffic has dropped dramatically recently, and I’m wondering if WordPress is using that to pressure me into paying for promotion. I think your writing is consistently first-class, btw. Thanks! ~Mitch

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    1. Hey Mitch, thanks for the message. I don’t use Blaze and couldn’t comment on its effectiveness. When I’m not writing / posting new poems, I repost older ones to keep people looking at my site. The posts with higher likes will be older ones that have been reposted multiple times. It can take awhile to build up followers, likes, etc – just keep at it and you’ll get there. I used to be very active on WordPress and would visit lots of sites, read and comment. I found a lot of the great community would return favor. I’ve been a bit time-poor lately, but hope to get back on board soon. It really is a great community of very talented, friendly people when you start to explore. Best of luck, mate 🙂

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