En Passant

It wasn’t a spectacular leaf:
rather drab, too long from tree.
Yet, the life it clutched
in its five trembling points
turned my strides into steps
into stasis. I watched
as it danced,
sucking more from a gust
than nearby leaves
better suited to flying.
It spiraled away
to a lazuline sky
while I remained rooted;
going nowhere.

Ryan Stone

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44 responses to “En Passant”

  1. Lovely metaphor and imagery. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. Thank you, Georgette ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. This is wonderfully written, with a very unique voice. I enjoyed!

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    1. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a comment – it means so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. “Strides into steps into stassis…” Beautifully expressed! ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Why thank you, Yusra ๐Ÿ˜‰

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    2. Edward Thรฉrรจse Jr. Avatar
      Edward Thรฉrรจse Jr.

      I agree, that was the best part of a great poem.

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      1. Thanks so much, mate. I’m really enjoying your blog.

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      2. Edward Thรฉrรจse Jr. Avatar
        Edward Thรฉrรจse Jr.

        Thanks, Ryan. I’ll keep up my best if you will.

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  4. I love this Ryan

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    1. Thank you, Souldiergirl – I really enjoy your writing, too so that is a very big compliment ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. You are very very welcome. My pleasure Ryan :))

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    Manan Unleashed

    I’m glad you are reposting old poems and letting new followers marvel some more at your poetry.. This was poignant, lovely imagery too. You are a pleasure to read. I have something along the same lines.
    You were the spring
    I was the flower

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    1. Thanks, Manan. There’s a fair few that I posted when I first started on WP and had very few followers. I thought I’d try to inject some new life into them while I’m putting the finishing touches on some new stuff ๐Ÿ™‚

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        Manan Unleashed

        Good man! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. One of your most attractive titles as well! Loved the uniqueness in the post…

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    1. Excellent feedback, thank you. It means so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. Well, fall is my favorite season, so anything involving a leaf is enjoyable, but you out-do yourself in every post. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. You’re far too kind, Belinda…but please don’t stop ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. That made me smile. Good night from Canada. It’s the wee hours here. ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. Sweet dreams ๐Ÿ™‚

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      3. By now I am guessing it’s your turn. ๐Ÿ™‚

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      4. Yes – for a few hours it was…now it’s 6am and I’m up before the sun. Lovely ๐Ÿ™‚

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      5. That is amazing! You get to enjoy sunrise! Perfect way to start a day. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. moonskittles Avatar
    moonskittles

    Some things go, and somethings stay..The beauty of this piece remains strongly attached to the autumn images it creates in our minds. A leaf has nothing to fear, but fear itself..
    Gorgeous as always ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Ah, how I love your feedback. Thank you, Dajena ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. moonskittles Avatar
        moonskittles

        Just like I do yours ๐Ÿ˜€
        You are welcome dear Ryan ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. A. M. Yeager Avatar
    A. M. Yeager

    Hey! I remember this one! Leslie did a beautiful job recording it. Love it!! ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Yep-she’s the best ๐Ÿ™‚ Thanks!

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  10. Makes something from nothing … less is more!

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    1. Cheers, Dave!

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  11. Powerful, and you used one of my fave words–“lazuline” ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. It’s a ripper of a word, alright. Great feedback, thank you!

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      1. I like that: “a ripper of a word”!

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  12. ah, the different paths we take- beautiful, Ryan

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    1. Thank you so much, Beth ๐Ÿ™‚

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  13. I love your focused imagery, stunning. And your word and sentence placement is flow itself, truly makes the experience of your poem.

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    1. Thank you, Amira. Grateful as always ๐Ÿ™‚

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  14. beautiful!

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  15. Very soft and light, I love it !

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    1. Thank you, Sebastien. Very kind ๐Ÿ™‚

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  16. ‘lazuline’ ? will have to look that one up —

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  17. โค

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