The Long Road

I drink all day
and then strike out
along that winding road,
where shadows flit
by leafy bough
and twilight waits
for no-one;

where failing light
births fickle fiends
who writhe and tempt
the absent mind.
In deepen wood
where mildew clings
to night’s cool breath,
a parting kiss

for seasons
long since flown.

Ryan Stone

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21 responses to “The Long Road”

  1. leslieanneonus Avatar
    leslieanneonus

    Did you take this photo? It’s stunning, just like your poem ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. You’re lovely, Leslie ๐Ÿ™‚ Yep, all the photos are mine. Lucky to live in a beautiful place.

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  2. I love this poem – is it new?

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    1. Thank you, Nicky. Reasonably – Week 234 ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. moonskittles Avatar
    moonskittles

    This must have come from a deep dark space my friend. The second stanza made me feel you have been reading my mind’s description of my top 5 reasons why I don’t like to walk in the forest in the dark. yet, pain has to go somewhere. I hope the long journey has come to a good end.

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    1. Thankfully it was only a deep dark imagined space this time around – my world is bright, thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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        moonskittles

        YAY!! Happy to hear that! Stay bright! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Manan Unleashed Avatar
    Manan Unleashed

    This somehow reminded me of Robert Frost. So masterly in its execution. You have no idea Ryan how much I’m enjoying your words. A truly refreshing departure from your usual style. Not that your haikus are any less beautiful, my friend. But isn’t versality truly appealing?
    And yes, I must also thank you for your comment up there where you’ve said the dark space as an imagined frame of mind. I’ve been trying to justify the cause of poets/writers (through my “Bane of being a poet”) as being able to produce work simply on the basis of imagination of maybe weaving an entire story out of a tiny shred of truth.

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  5. Such talent. This is wonderful, as usual ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. You’re so good for my ego – thanks! ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. You’re very welcome…and egos need to be stroked sometimes ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  6. Beautifully rendered ! โค

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    1. Thank you so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Welcome ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. Excellent poem, really enjoyed it, particularly the fickle fiends.

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    1. Thanks so much! Really appreciate your thoughtful feedback ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. Love this Ryan, both your words and imagery.

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    1. Very nice of you, Miriam. Thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. Continue to, venture into the woods, not knowing what you’ll find, in the, darkness…

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  10. I think you’ve ventured deep into the Dandenong’s Ryan …

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