Fleeting

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Fleeting

In bed
their tattoos met
and bled.

Ink-kissed
lovers, knowing
their tryst,

night-born
would live to die
with dawn.

Ryan Stone

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27 responses to “Fleeting”

  1. loved the imagery!

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    1. Loved the feedback! ๐Ÿ˜‰
      haha, thank you!

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      1. you are welcome dear Poet!

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  2. Ryan, this is one of my favorites! Awesome<3

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    1. It’s a lovely form, isn’t it? Thank you for being so kind, Carisa ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. It’s beyond lovely ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Beautiful poem! Love the line about ink bleeding.

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    1. Thanks so much, Melinda ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. You’re welcome ๐Ÿ™‚

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    hooklineandinkwell

    Great use of figurative language in this piece, Ryan and a fantastic example of a Musette…so glad you took time to write one ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. I’m stoked you introduced me to them-love the form! Thank you for the feedback, I’ll keep practicing.

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        hooklineandinkwell

        I am happy you enjoy it and I await more of your ‘practice’ pieces ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. La Sabrosona Avatar
    La Sabrosona

    Super sexy and hot. Nicely done. And thanks for rekindling my deep desire to ink myself, well not myself, to get inked. I love water colour tats but my Mexican says he’ll divorce me, lol. He’s a bit conservative when it comes to tats. I want the South African saying for empathy “Strongs” inked somewhere, likely on my wrist. I was also thinking of an anchor. Are you inked vecino?

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    1. Covered in them. This poem is a little biographical. Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback. As for tattoos – personally I love them but not at the risk of a happy marriage ๐Ÿ˜‰

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        La Sabrosona

        Good point. Makes sense ๐Ÿ˜‰ and you’re most welcome.

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  6. moonskittles Avatar
    moonskittles

    Somehow I stumbled back here.. Fleeting – is really a word I have used a lot and this poem resonates with this feeling.
    Personification is superb and the expected melancholia congeals my veins… sigh..

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    1. Haha, thank you ๐Ÿ™‚
      I saw the musette form on Thomas’s site and loved it right away.

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        moonskittles

        It suits you well! More in the shelf perhaps? ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      2. I’m just about to sit down with a coffee and try another one actually. Do you have a topic suggestion for me?

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      3. moonskittles Avatar
        moonskittles

        YES!!!
        Dusk ๐Ÿ˜€

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      4. Excellent! It’s a deal ๐Ÿ™‚

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        moonskittles

        yay! (squealing happily)

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    1. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. ๐Ÿ™ cheers Ryan ๐Ÿท

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  7. powerful musette

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    1. Thank you, dear Beth ๐Ÿ™‚

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