Outside, in the distance
a wild cat did growl
two riders were approaching
the wind began to howl. -Bob Dylan
Hoofbeats on the tundra!
Beneath a mage’s moon
she draws her shutters closely,
prays morning finds her soon.
Thunder shatters silence,
a rapping at her door
tears the night asunder–
a wild cat’s chilling roar.
All along the cornflower
rows, shadows dance with glee,
seeking answers as the wind
howls by a lone oak tree.
Dawn finds an empty homestead–
bleeds in through broken panes,
across spilled dill an’ fennel
and spattered, rusty stains.
Ryan Stone
first published by Poppy Road Review, August 2017

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Thanks, Chris. Truly appreciated 🙂
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Ahh, a scary poem Ryan, maybe one the “Slasher Monster Magazine”
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Ominous, suspenseful and cliffhanging. This could be a trailer for a film. I love this, Ryan!
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Great stuff! Thanks so much 🙂
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You are most welcome, Ryan. 🙂
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creepy and wonderful!
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Haha, nice response. Thank you, Beth 🙂
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Superb eerieness, Ryan.
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And a perfect response! Thank you so much, Eugenia 🙂
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🙂
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What a fantastic way to carry forward Dylon’s beautiful verse. He would have been so proud, methinks! Its rhythmic and powerfully thrilling. A potent and heady mix of omens and bone chilling suspense. The second verse is a killer and the finale is drop dead (literally) gorgeous. If I didn’t know you any better and had stumbled upon this piece, I would have assumed Stephen King had tried his hand at poetry. (Don’t call me a flatterer no, you!)
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Do I need to mail you a cheque for all this wonderful (and flattering!) feedback, dear N? You’re far too kind but my ego doesn’t mind one bit! Thank you so much. I hope your weekend has been a good one:)
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That would be $100 please and some more. Haha. I’m good for your ego. 😂
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I love this vibe so much, Ryan
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ooh-
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Back in August 2017 I said, “Ahh, a scary poem Ryan, maybe one the “Slasher Monster Magazine” “, but the online magazine has stop operating …
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Always sad when they fall by the wayside… Thanks again, Ivor. My poor attempt at a tribute to Dylan’s fine lyrics 🙂
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Dylan’s words are a hard act to follow Ryan … 🖋😎
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True that
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Nights sometimes get, too dark, too, scary, that, we simply, can’t, get through them, but, nature always, brings that, light of hope to us, if we hold on long enough, then, we will, see it.
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Lovely response. Thank you 🙂
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Woah, this is so cool. I love the rhyme and rhythmic element too!! It all flows and goes together.
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Thanks so much, Amira. Means more than you could possibly know 🙂
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