Queen of Nothing

I barely remember how the hues of December
cast sepia waves through her hair. Those words
she first uttered: out here there be monsters,
seemed a plea, not a thing to beware.

A quick realisation: she sailed a maelstrom
mainlining a vein named despair. Lost
within dreams of heroine queens,
I drew heart-shaped clouds in thin air.

It felt like I’d woken when she said yes, you’re broken
but I’ll show you real broke, if you dare.
As our ship
ran aground, frayed dreams dragged us down;
to the depths of her fell monster’s lair.

Ryan Stone

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32 responses to “Queen of Nothing”

  1. Is that your painting too, Ryan? It’s AMAZING! I love the texture of it, the dark-to-light gradient, and of course the clouds themselves. The ones at the bottom especially look so realistic! Just beautiful! 😊

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    1. It is mine but only via an app on my iPad. I struggle even to finger paint! πŸ™‚

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      1. Haha, still. Had us fooled for a bit 😊 Great picture anyway 😊

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  2. I just noticed that too! Jeez, you paint well and write well… multi-talented artist, very cool!

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    1. Hahaha, I know, right?!! 😊 It says in ‘About’ that he plays guitar as well. The list is neverending! 😊 So awesome and impressive! I think that secretly he is also a professional juggler and ski champion and gymnast and lion tamer and street magician and world class photographer and Michelin Star chef… 😊 ^_^ Hehehe…

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      1. Electric guitar, yes. Juggling, a little. Does snowboarding count? I once did a cartwheel, my dog is well-trained, I take a mean snap with my iPhone and make wicked ham, cheese & tomato toasties… Sorry to disappoint πŸ˜‰

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      2. “I once did a cartwheel…” <– I laughed out loud πŸ˜› Not bad! I'm still trying to master a handstand! 😊

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    2. You girls are lovely but I’m afraid it’s computer painting only and I started with a photograph. I’d love to be able to paint like this with real paint and canvas. Thanks for your nice comments though πŸ™‚

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    moonskittles

    So many great lines, such a cathartic write! “mainlining a vein named despair” – i could almost feel the sting of this one.. wish I could have written it!

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚ It was an interesting relationship.

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        moonskittles

        I am going to guess after 14 πŸ˜‰

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      2. Hahahah, touchΓ© clever lady. Much later πŸ™‚

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  4. I seriously love this poem Ryan!! Brilliant! ❀️

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    1. You’re the best! Thanks, Jen πŸ˜€

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      1. No, you are! ☺️

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      2. Lol πŸ˜‰

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    1. Thank you so much πŸ˜€

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  5. Wowza, this is magical!!

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    1. Haha, thank you! Greatly appreciated πŸ™‚

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      1. Most welcome.

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    Heartafire

    Stunning poetry Ryan!

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    1. Very kind of you, Holly. Thank you πŸ™‚

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  7. Your running rhyme is so skillfully woven that it feels natural nut forced. How do you do it?

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    1. That’s wonderful to hear! I struggle with rhyme and normally give up because I find I sound forced. So good to know it worked this time. Thank you πŸ™‚

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      1. I’ve never read any poem written by you where the rhyming sounds forced

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  8. Beautiful words and image. *Awed*

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    1. Thank you so much, Nathalie…and…Happy Birthday to you, my friend πŸ™‚

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      1. Thank you Ryan, I appreciate it πŸ™‚

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  9. swirling downward into the vortex

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    1. And who ever knows how deep it goes…

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