On a Monday I met her, but should’ve known better-
moon days bode ill for new friends.
Lunar sea tides with light and dark sides
make Monday trysts wane to weak ends.
Aphelion eyes, dark hair and toned thighs
presaged a blue moon ascending.
With a wink and a gun, she blocked out the sun
in total eclipse, never-ending.
Said, taking my hand: you’ve the look of a man
who’d rather not sleep ’til he’s dead.
I refuse to work harder or pay for my Prada,
let’s dance with the Devil instead.
We ran for a time on a dream and a dime,
both stolen and hard to sustain.
At the trail’s grim end, a posse of men
machine-gunned love’s final refrain.
Ryan Stone
First published at Poetry Nook, May 2017.

ah, the danger of a meeting on a moon day…… wonderful
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Yep, nothing good can come from such meetings 😉 Thanks once again, Beth. I’m glad you liked it. Rhyming poetry isn’t my strong point.
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Love it (even if it IS a rhyming poem)! ;]
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If it helps at all, it’s bad rhyming poetry 😉 Thanks, Al.
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Wonderful story in this one. I loved the description of Aphelion eyes. I’m still thinking about how that would look 🙂
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🙂
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Could a rhyming poem be more moving and absolutely brilliant? I don’t think so.
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Way too kind, Holly. But my ego says a great big thank you 🙂
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You deserve praise, wonderful writing
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Brilliant writing, as ever – I love this.
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Thank you, Nat. Very kind. I hope you’ve been well 🙂
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I’ve been good, thanks – I hope life is treating you well 🙂
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Great to hear! Yes, very well thank you 🙂
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Good 👍
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a dream and a dime – that has to be the mandatory basis for any meaningful relationship. Happy endings are overrated 🙂
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Agreed, my friend. With thanks
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Moon dreams
Without the cream
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So it would seem 🙂
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wow, wow, and it can only end as it began, with a powerful and sudden blast.
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Thank you, Beth. Such a tragic but interesting tale. Happy Easter 🙂
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