everything lead grey—heavy as storm clouds.
The trail I follow around the lake, swallowed
by mildew and mud. Branch bridges and detours
crisscross, from walkers bypassing flash floods.
A wind howls through weeping willow skeletons,
haunting my passage. Boots grow heavy with each
step. Treacherous soles threaten to betray.
Nestled among tree roots, wood ducks huddle
in sleepy pairs, wings folded—waiting.
This grey world feels like it’s paused, poised
on the edge of tomorrow—a lone yellow jonquil
fighting free of the detritus for a glimpse
of fleeting light. This is the winter of darkness.
Above me, storm clouds open. Ahead, the trail blurs.
Ryan Stone
First published at Eunoia Review December 2023

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Thanks, Steve
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and you will find you way through
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Your poem does well to describe the mood… I hope there is warmth and light at the end of it… for this poem, for everyone, right now it feels the whole world is plunged in gloom.
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There’s always warmth and light there, Rajani. Your beautiful poetry is one of the sources. Thank you for your thoughts, my friend. Be well 🙂
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Awww thanks, Ryan… you certainly brightened up my morning!
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Incredible as always ❤
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Lovely as always 🙂
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The photograph and the poem blend perfectly to reveal one.
“This grey world feels like it’s paused, poised
on the edge of tomorrow—”
This line is my favourite 🤩
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So good to hear! Thanks so much 🙂
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Despite the obvious physical “greyness” of this poem, it feels sort of comfortable and reassuring too. Not sure if that was intended, nonetheless I felt warmth from reading this, thank you!
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Yes! Exactly the place this one came from…so happy to hear that came across. Big smile over here. Thank you, Amira
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So glad! This is one of many reasons why poetry is so cool.
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