The Wind Whispers, The Wind Sighs

– after Longfellow

The wind whispers, the wind sighs,
the dawn light brightens, a magpie cries;
amongst the gum trees tall and green
a girl becomes a faerie queen.
And the wind whispers, the wind sighs.

Morning settles beneath silk skies,
her reign flits by like dragonflies;
deep shadows dress the naked hill
in dusk, as faerie wings fall still.
And the wind whispers, the wind sighs.

Night throws a cloak; a barn owl cries,
another answers, stars blink like eyes.
The queen is gone, wonโ€™t come again;
these woods forever will remain.
And the wind whispers, the wind sighs.

– Ryan Stone

first published at Poetry Nook, May 2020


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34 responses to “The Wind Whispers, The Wind Sighs”

  1. Soft and evocative with a hint of longing. Love it Ryan.

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    1. Thank you, Miriam ๐Ÿ™‚
      I hope youโ€™re well

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      1. Yes, keeping well Ryan. Hope you are too. ๐Ÿ˜

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      2. Happy to hear that. Yes, very well thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. this is really good Ryan.

    Sent from my iPad

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    1. Thanks, Steve. Happy Birthday ๐Ÿฅณ

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  3. Beautiful, Ryan!

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    1. Thank you, Sarah ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Really BEAUTIFUL.

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    1. Very kind. Thanks so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. Perfect rhythm and rhyme. ๐Ÿ˜‰

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    1. Thank you for reading ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. My pleasure. ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  6. The words just flow in an enchanting rhythm.. lovely, Ryan.

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    1. Thank you, Rajani the Prolific, youโ€™re very kind. I hope you are safe and well.

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      1. It’s been a bit crazy in India with the lockdown and the curve still climbing. But that is the new normal, I suppose. Always good to read your work.

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  7. Really soft and lovely

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    1. Made me smile ๐Ÿ™‚ Thank you

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      1. You’re so welcome

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  8. Your repetition line at the end of each stanza exqisitely softened the rhythm of your words, and had me calmly listening to the sounds of nature …
    “And the wind whispers, the wind sighs.”

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    1. Ivor! Thank you so much ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. My pleasure Ryan.. your poem brightened up my day …

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      2. As your comments have brightened mine

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  9. Reblogged this on Ivor.Plumber/Poet and commented:
    An exquisite poem by Ryan Stone. I thoroughly recommend that you have a read … Ryan is an Australia poet …

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  10. This is so beautiful! The word-pics are vivid, the emotions strong. It touches my heart. ๐Ÿ™‚
    (((HUGS)))
    PS…I came by via Ivor’s blogsite! ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thanks so much for visiting and leaving such thoughtful comments ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. You’re welcome! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  11. oh my what a handsome fellow! Kudos for such an enchantingly soothing magic poem and pic ๐Ÿ™‚
    PS I meant your four legged mate ๐Ÿ˜‰

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    1. Haha, he says thanks ๐Ÿ™‚ As do I for your lovely comments.

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      1. pleasure is all mine Ryan, nice to meet you!

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      2. Likewise, Kate. Thanks for stopping by

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  12. and she is gone with the wind, but not forgotten

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    1. Beautiful, Beth ๐Ÿ™‚

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