days of stone

Juncture

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Ryan Stone
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Under the bleachers
She asked my fumbling fingers
Is this your first time?

Ryan Stone

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12 responses to “Juncture”

  1. moonskittles Avatar
    moonskittles

    Packed with innocence. Love the personification. 🙂

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    1. Ryan Stone Avatar
      Ryan Stone

      Thanks once more – I love this form, nice to hear it came across ok

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      1. moonskittles Avatar
        moonskittles

        Yes, I like it too, and you do it justice!

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      2. Ryan Stone Avatar
        Ryan Stone

        Too sweet!

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      3. moonskittles Avatar
        moonskittles

        diabetic?

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      4. Ryan Stone Avatar
        Ryan Stone

        Lol…and witty, too 😉

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      5. moonskittles Avatar
        moonskittles

        yes you are 😀

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  2. hooklineandinkwell Avatar
    hooklineandinkwell

    It was a barn for me…I love how you capture these significant moments without really giving it away

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    1. Ryan Stone Avatar
      Ryan Stone

      We all have our memories 😉 Understated always works best for me, I find. Great feedback, thank you.

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      1. hooklineandinkwell Avatar
        hooklineandinkwell

        Yes, we do and I agree…it’s best to leave certain things to the imagination so that readers can draw from their own experiences. You are kindly welcome 🙂

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  3. beth Avatar
    beth

    Gentle and innocent

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    1. Ryan Stone Avatar
      Ryan Stone

      Thank you, Beth

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