Under the bleachers
She asked my fumbling fingers
Is this your first time?
Ryan Stone
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too much coffee, too little sleep, a love of words…
days of stone 
Packed with innocence. Love the personification. 🙂
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Thanks once more – I love this form, nice to hear it came across ok
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Yes, I like it too, and you do it justice!
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Too sweet!
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diabetic?
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Lol…and witty, too 😉
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yes you are 😀
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It was a barn for me…I love how you capture these significant moments without really giving it away
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We all have our memories 😉 Understated always works best for me, I find. Great feedback, thank you.
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Yes, we do and I agree…it’s best to leave certain things to the imagination so that readers can draw from their own experiences. You are kindly welcome 🙂
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Gentle and innocent
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Thank you, Beth
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