In treehouse shadows
Shyly she stepped from her clothes
And I from my youth
Ryan Stone
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44 responses to “Bloom”
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This literally made me say OMG out loud! Hahahaha – I am awestruck even now. How did you tell you such a huge story in so few words??? Magic! Magic!!! 😊 😊
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One doesn’t need to write a book to capture this sentiment that you clearly bring to life with profound brevity.
My mouth just formed a perfect O – wonderful, in a strangely sweet and innocent way
Every post is a master piece Ryan! I always leave here with a heart full of emotions…be it sorrow or anger or love… I feel your passion through your words! ^_^
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Heya! Thank you for your beautiful words, Aishwarya – I always look forward to your amazing, thoughtful feedback. A response like yours makes writing worthwhile. Thank you 🙂
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Hi Ryan, thanks again! Not sure if you have read it, but you are a poet with depths, I’d really like to know what you think of it. I’m going to continue to post more about the first chapter today. Here is the link of the first bit: https://heathercai.wordpress.com/2016/08/03/the-fucking-book-less-than-mystery-part-one-the-dwarf/
I built my first tree house when I was eleven .. proudly I sat there in my piece of heaven
You are so talented, your work is just so breathtaking. Thank you for sharing a part of your beautiful self with us Ryan.
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