days of stone

Awakening

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by

Ryan Stone
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midwinter, pale sun
draped in white lace, the first time
I saw her naked

Ryan Stone

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10 responses to “Awakening”

  1. bethene318 Avatar
    bethene318

    Hi Ryan, re you’re THE Ryan Stone originally of Licking, MO? Nice poem. Is this a blog? Are you publishing things other write or just your stuff? Please tell me more, even if you aren’t THE Ryan Stone. (I think you are.} Cheers, Beth

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      Ryan Stone

      Hi, Beth. No, I’m Australian born and bred. But thank you for reading anyway 🙂

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  2. Sarah Hankins Avatar
    Sarah Hankins

    You’re back!! Lovely, but I can’t figure out how to comment. And the first comment is kind of garbled in the print. Is it for you too? This is big! I can’t wait for more.

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      Ryan Stone

      Thanks for the nudge, Sarah 🙂

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  3. Rajani Radhakrishnan Avatar
    Rajani Radhakrishnan

    Seeing you here after quite a while, Ryan and with a lovely haiku…!!!

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    1. Ryan Stone Avatar
      Ryan Stone

      Hey stranger! It’s been awhile. Thank you, lovely to see you 🙂

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  4. Elizabeth Hykes Avatar
    Elizabeth Hykes

    So you are THE Ryan Stone from Australia. Hmmm. Well, perhaps the name carries some magic. Anyway, I don’t know how you ended up in my email, but I am glad you did..

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      Ryan Stone

      Haha! Me too. Thank you 🙂

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  5. Ken / rivrvlogr Avatar
    Ken / rivrvlogr

    This is great. It can be read as either a haiku or as a senryū.

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    1. Ryan Stone Avatar
      Ryan Stone

      Thanks, Ken. Appreciated 🙂

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