
Advertisement for Myers Gloves, by Margaret Watkins (Canada), 1920s.
Mother’s Hands
Strong enough to lift me
each time I couldn’t rise. Soft
as cotton wool, washing
dirt from scrapes and tears
from eyes. Firm enough
to model clay
and boys, to bowls
and men, yet fine
when stroking ivory keys–
Fรผr Elise and Clair de Lune.
They’d curl through each long evening
around her only vice, in a holder
like Audrey’s, that never left her side.
I’m thinking of her hands now–
strong and wild and free; missing
her hands now, as I watch ashes
blow to sea.
Ryan Stone
Written for the 20 poem challenge at Ekphrastic, September 2016.
First published at Ekphrastic, September 2016
This is wonderful, Ryan.
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Thanks so much. I’ve just been exploring your site – stunning!
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Thanks for visiting and for all your comments. Looking forward to reading more of your posts.
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It was a pleasure.
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a beautiful tribute to go with this interesting ad –
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Hello, Beth. Thank you once again ๐
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Romantic aren’t you Mr. Stone! Which gloves, again?
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Lovelyโบ
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Thank you, Joci ๐ I hope you’ve been well.
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Ryan, this is so lovely โค
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Thank you, Nat. I’m so glad you liked it. Hope you’re well ๐
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You’re very welcome – I’m good, thanks, Ryan. I hope life is treating you well too ๐
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Great to hear! Yes-very well thank you ๐
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I loved this and how it flowed. Beautiful ending…
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Such a lovely comment. Thank you ๐
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My pleasure Ryan. Smiles.
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Oh my goodness Ryan. This is so incredibly gorgeous, took my breath away.
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Just seeing your avatar on my blog again has made my day Souldiergirl. You are a bright light and I’ve missed you. Thanks so much for your thoughtful feedback, it means the world. I hope you’re well, my friend ๐
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Aww yay!! You’re so sweet to me Ryan. That makes me feel good. Your writing is truly breathtaking. Every time I visit I am in awe and also excited because you are so talented and it inspires me! Xx
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You’re lovely ๐
Have a magic weekend x
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You too!
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I can’t find the right literary term for this, but I like how you used this literary device so the Mom’s hand represented her whole self. She comes across elegantly, artistic, and loving. Her having that same cigarette holder as Audrey makes her seem both classy , yet at the same time may give us indication of what she may have passed away from. She is remembered a the end, again through her hands, but they too are ashes as the rest of her. Lovely work Ryan!
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Wow-thank you for taking so much time to read and understand, Amanda. Your analysis is spot on. I’m flattered to have someone read so closely. Huge smile, thanks ๐
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Metonymy ๐
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Pick the English teacher ๐
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Yeah, thank you ๐
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Loved it!! I can see the smoke wrapping memories and the mist of reminiscence slowly settling down, so it can rise again, when the time comes.
Dajena
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Thank you so much m, Miss Skittles. WP hasn’t been the same without you, my friend ๐
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Feels good to be missed.
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Well, you can feel very good then ๐
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^ ^
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This is so beautiful Ryan! I also wrote a poem titled “Hands”! Yours describe the hands which gives a mother’s love, protection and sweetness, but also are the hands of a woman that intensely lived her life experiences until the end flowing away in ashes blow to sea for her life in eternity. Always your work is beautifully written! I hope you’re well!
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You’re lovely, Carolina. Thank you for taking the time to leave such a thoughtful comment. Made me smile. All well, ta. Hope you are as well ๐
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You’re welcome Ryan all your poems deserve the time for a thoughtful comment! ๐ All well here too!
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Beautiful tribute Ryan . You disappeared from my reader and mail until today. I hope all is well. X
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Yeah, that happens to me often. Very annoying. Well, it’s nice to be back ๐ Thanks for your feedback. All well here, ta – I hope you are too ๐
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All is well! :))
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This is lovely
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Thank you kindly
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You’re very welcome!
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fitting tribute to a much loved mother … sounds like it has a ring of truth in there! Classy, cheeky but devoted … she will be missed ๐
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Thank you ๐
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welcome ๐
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