After all the years, the heart-shaped
promises, a Ponts des Arts love lock
one Spring, it has come now to this —
a sterile room, too-small-for-two bed,
plastic flowers, faint urine smell.
Standing bedside, she strokes and hums,
remembers a warm night by the sea.
The setting sun kisses white hair
golden. Tremors become twitches,
become silence.
Ryan Stone

such a sad loss –
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Thank you for your comment, Beth. Enjoy the week ahead 🙂
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Oh man, this is such a heavy piece. To sit and watch death arrive is something one would not wish on anyone. This reminded me of my mother’s passing and how it must have been for my dad to watch her slowly and achingly disappear from his world. Great artwork to accompany this piece, too. It is itself poetic!
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Thank you for all your nice words, mate. Always appreciated. The picture was originally a photo I snapped on my phone, I’m glad you liked it 🙂 I’m sorry if I dredged up any sad memories, that’s a very hard thing to go through.
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You are most welcome, my friend. I love the image and the words and there is no need to apologize for the recalled memories – we are all a sum of our memories!
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Beautiful, Ryan.
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Thanks, Sarah 🙂
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Beautiful, and so poignant.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Deeply emotional and sad, oh sigh, “that sound of silence”.
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Thanks so much, Ivor – I really appreciate your feedback 🙂
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Ryan, your writing never disappoints. “In Passing” is a beautiful capture of a life lived and loved. Your photo is stunning with the moon visible between the tree branches, very peaceful. Please enjoy your week. ~ Mia
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Thank you, Mia. Wishing you a wonderful week too 🙂
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You’re welcome, Ryan. Thank you. 🙂
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Ryan my friend, I’m shutting the hell up. 🙂
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😉
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So very sad, Ryan, but so beautifully written 🙂
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Thanks so much, Judy. I hope you’re well 🙂
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My pleasure Ryan. Yes I am very well Thanks, I hope you are too 😊
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Sorrowful Ryan. But also sweet that he dies beside the woman he’s loved all these years, that they have all these wonderful memories between them. I do not think there is such a thing as a ‘good death’ but at least being next, being touched by his wife of many years, I think that’s a close one to ‘good.’
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Hi, Amanda. How is your weekend going? Thank you for your thoughtful response – you know it is always so happily received 🙂
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Thanks Ryan, going well. Summer here is always nice with so much to see and do. Also, had some time to sit and read through others blogs so that was nice as well 🙂 How are you?
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So good to hear! I’m well thank you – winter is starting to lose its grip at last 🙂
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Beautifully sad and resonant
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment – truly appreciated 🙂
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Truly my pleasure.
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LOVE LOVE LOVE! And that photo! ❤
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Thanks so much, Al. Lovely to see you here 🙂
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It’s lovely to be back. Especially if it means reading more of your writing! 😀
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Oh, Ryan, damn this is just so sad and incredibly beautiful. You always leave us with such deep feelings…
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Thank you, CC. Too kind 🙂
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Always, Ryan 🙂
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heartbreaking
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❤️
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And, that would be, how the love, slowly becomes, rotted out, and need to get, disposed, of…
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Oh, this is very touching. A warm poem, that builds a delicate sadness. Beautifully penned, thank you for sharing!
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Thank you for your kindness, Miriam
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a love and loss both on the edge
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