I barely remember how the hues of December
cast sepia waves through her hair. Those words
she first uttered: out here there be monsters,
seemed a plea, not a thing to beware.
A quick realisation: she sailed a maelstrom
mainlining a vein named despair. Lost
within dreams of heroine queens,
I drew heart-shaped clouds in thin air.
It felt like I’d woken when she said yes, you’re broken
but I’ll show you real broke, if you dare. As our ship
ran aground, frayed dreams dragged us down;
to the depths of her fell monster’s lair.
Ryan Stone
Is that your painting too, Ryan? It’s AMAZING! I love the texture of it, the dark-to-light gradient, and of course the clouds themselves. The ones at the bottom especially look so realistic! Just beautiful! π
LikeLiked by 2 people
It is mine but only via an app on my iPad. I struggle even to finger paint! π
LikeLike
Haha, still. Had us fooled for a bit π Great picture anyway π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I just noticed that too! Jeez, you paint well and write well⦠multi-talented artist, very cool!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Hahaha, I know, right?!! π It says in ‘About’ that he plays guitar as well. The list is neverending! π So awesome and impressive! I think that secretly he is also a professional juggler and ski champion and gymnast and lion tamer and street magician and world class photographer and Michelin Star chef… π ^_^ Hehehe…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Electric guitar, yes. Juggling, a little. Does snowboarding count? I once did a cartwheel, my dog is well-trained, I take a mean snap with my iPhone and make wicked ham, cheese & tomato toasties… Sorry to disappoint π
LikeLike
“I once did a cartwheel…” <– I laughed out loud π Not bad! I'm still trying to master a handstand! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
You girls are lovely but I’m afraid it’s computer painting only and I started with a photograph. I’d love to be able to paint like this with real paint and canvas. Thanks for your nice comments though π
LikeLiked by 1 person
So many great lines, such a cathartic write! “mainlining a vein named despair” – i could almost feel the sting of this one.. wish I could have written it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you π It was an interesting relationship.
LikeLiked by 2 people
I am going to guess after 14 π
LikeLiked by 2 people
Hahahah, touchΓ© clever lady. Much later π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I seriously love this poem Ryan!! Brilliant! β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 2 people
You’re the best! Thanks, Jen π
LikeLiked by 1 person
No, you are! βΊοΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lol π
LikeLiked by 1 person
IT IS GOOD
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much π
LikeLike
Wowza, this is magical!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Haha, thank you! Greatly appreciated π
LikeLike
Most welcome.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Stunning poetry Ryan!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very kind of you, Holly. Thank you π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your running rhyme is so skillfully woven that it feels natural nut forced. How do you do it?
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s wonderful to hear! I struggle with rhyme and normally give up because I find I sound forced. So good to know it worked this time. Thank you π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’ve never read any poem written by you where the rhyming sounds forced
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful words and image. *Awed*
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Nathalie…and…Happy Birthday to you, my friend π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Ryan, I appreciate it π
LikeLiked by 1 person